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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Mon Feb 18, 2013 10:08 pm

Power type:evil eye (2 slots)
Catagory:supernatural
Description:when Xander tales those sunglasses he always wears, he exposes his enemy to a high energy beam of paralyzing magic

Power type:Invisible coat (1 slot)
Catagory:Supernatural
Description: this allows Xander to enchant his trench coat with a charm that makes him invisible to all enemies

Power type: enchanted sword slash (1 slot)
Catagory: technological/supernatural
Description:Xander's enchanted sword causes major bleeding and long-term poisoning, causing minor paralysis.
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Post by The Ninja on Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:38 pm

I'm going to need a more detailed description (as well as limits) for each of these.

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:31 pm

Sorry i was in a rush last time

Power type: evil eye (2 slots)
Catagory: supernatural
Description: paralyzing magic, etc. Lasts up to five minutes on a subject at full blast (30 seconds at least). Only one minute for a quick glance. Must be looking at the target's eyes at twenty feet at least.

Power type: invisible cloak (1 slot)
Category: supernatural
Description: invisibility charm, etc. Lasts for ten minutes, causes a minor confusion in enemies who seek him, unless they know where he is. Is not invulnerable, it just deflects protons around xander's body.

Power type: enchanted sword slash (1 slot)
Category: supernatural/technological
Description: enchanted sword etc. Cannot pass through anything a normal sword can't, but has poisoning and stun affects. Works best when target is motionless. As a short sword (three and a half feet), it can only be used when target is in range. Works best on joint areas, where poison is most likely to take hold

Enough?

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Post by Death's Kiss on Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:34 pm

looks good

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:36 pm

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Post by The Ninja on Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:54 pm

Evil Eye approved at 6 slots.

Invisible cloak approved at 2 slots (but you can make it last for 15 instead of 10 minutes)

Enchanted sword slash approved at 2 slots.

So, you won't be able to use Evil Eye for a bit.

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Post by Death's Kiss on Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:57 pm

FYI binding powers have to be 5 points or more.
so hop into a forum and start rp-ing

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Post by The Ninja on Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:59 pm

Death's Kiss, I would really appreciate it if you could stop commenting on the applications Razz I know you are trying to be helpful, but eventually it will lead to confusion.

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:10 am

Alright evil eye agreed, what about an agility bonus instead? Only one slot of course, and nothing major just enhanced reflexes the same as one would get for hard-core training. Unless that is too much for one slot
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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:14 am

Oh and death's kiss's posting is kinda my fault, he introduced me to this forum.
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Post by The Ninja on Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:37 am

Oh, it's not too big of a deal about him. I think I just need to make it a real only applicants and mods can post on apps.

An agility bonus at 1 slot is approved if that is all it is, but you need to fill out a power application for it.

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:52 am

Sorry i forgot to mention i was replacing the agility with the power detection unless it is too many slots
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Post by The Ninja on Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:54 am

Wait, I'm confused. Where is the power detection?

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:03 am

Xander (the Conqueror)'s power application 2
sorry I couldn't find my original
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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:30 am

Never mind the power detection

Power type: Enhanced reflexes (1 slot)
Category: Biological
Description: Enhanced reflexes, dodging and nimble movement due to enhanced muscle precision.
Weaknesses: no extra strength just precision
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Post by The Ninja on Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:32 am

Okay. Approved. Now I'm deleting the other thread.

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:32 am

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:54 pm

Power type: blast of magic (3 slots)
[bC]ategory[/b]: supernatural
Description: Xander can summon a ball of dark magic, red in color.Affects anyone in physical or supernatural forms. Enough to knock someone off their feet when closer than 15 feet, when closer than five feet it can cause pain enough that the recipient is slightly paralyzed in the area they were hit, lasting thirty seconds.
Weakness: no effect after fifteen feet, it takes 15 seconds to summon, cannot use for another hour, and cannot be used with another power.


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Post by The Ninja on Thu Mar 14, 2013 2:59 pm

Approved at 3 slots.

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Thu Mar 14, 2013 6:22 pm

thank you, just waiting for titian now
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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Thu Mar 14, 2013 6:45 pm

Um Im gonna change the last thing, so is this acceptable?

Power type: Blast of anti-magic ( 4 slots)
Category: Supernatural
Description: Blast of red fire-looking stuff, that is thrown at enemies.Affects anyone in physical or supernatural forms. Enough to knock someone off their feet when closer than 10 feet, when closer than five feet it can cause pain enough that the recipient is slightly paralyzed in the area they were hit, lasting thirty seconds. Can also penetrate Magic shielding, such as invisibility, and magic force fields.
Weakness: no effect after 10 feet, it takes 15 seconds to summon, cannot use for another hour.
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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Fri Mar 15, 2013 2:07 pm

Um mister busy ninja?
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Post by The Ninja on Wed Mar 20, 2013 11:24 am

I'm very sorry >.<; I am very busy right now but I'm trying to make time for this.

Approved at four slots.

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Post by Xander the Conquerer on Wed Mar 20, 2013 12:50 pm

thank you very much, sorry for bothering you
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Post by The Ninja on Wed Mar 20, 2013 7:01 pm

Don't worry, that's what I'm here for Razz I should be apologizing or neglecting my administrating.

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