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Peisinoe's Character Application

Post by Peisinoe on Mon Mar 18, 2013 10:28 pm

I hope that I did this right!
Super Name: Peisinoe

Alter Ego Name: Katie Wood

Alignment: Rogue

Starting City: Silent Falls.

Gender: female

Age: 17

Physical Description: 5’9, icy, almost white eyes, knee -length, wavy black hair, pale skin, slender yet strong, she always seems to have a wistful look about her

Costume: She has two costumes, one for home and one for combat, although they are very similar. Her combat outfit is a short, white, Greek style dress over white, knee-length leggings. Her more comfortable home attire is a longer, more flowing version of her combat dress that reaches the ground. At the shoulders, there are two matching silver pins in the shape of an Epirotes holding up a floor length cape of ice-blue silk

Biography: Katie lived with her dad up until two years ago when he was murdered by the Cleansers, a fanatical group of sirens who seek to purge their ancient blood of any "impurities" or half-bloods, like Katie was. After her father died, she ran away to a cave near Silent Falls to hide from her pursuers. That's when she met her mother, Ligeia, for the first time. Ligeia told her about the Cleansers and how they were the reason that Katie had never heard from her. She also told Katie that her real name actually wasn't Katie, but Peisinoe, a siren name. Since then Peisinoe has lived alone, fighting to stay alive whilst her grief eats away at her like the poison of the Hydra.

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Post by Argent on Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:50 am

Your a little short on your Bio you should flesh it out a bit more. My suggestion would be to inform us of what a siren is and why the cleanser's want to clean the bloodlines do they believe that human blood is poisonous or just solely erroding their society. If you do that you can easily fill up the necessary 100 or so words your missing.

Just bump this thread when you've updated or send me a PM
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Re: Peisinoe's Character Application

Post by Peisinoe on Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:06 pm

Is this better?

Super Name: Peisinoe

Alter Ego Name: Katie Wood

Alignment: Rogue

Starting City: Silent Falls.

Gender: female

Age: 17

Physical Description: 5’9, icy, almost white eyes, knee -length, wavy black hair, pale skin, slender yet strong, she always seems to have a wistful look about her

Costume: She has two costumes, one for home and one for combat, although they are very similar. Her combat outfit is a short, white, Greek style dress over white, knee-length leggings. Her more comfortable home attire is a longer, more flowing version of her combat dress that reaches the ground. At the shoulders, there are two matching silver pins in the shape of an Epirotes holding up a floor length cape of ice-blue silk

Biography: Seventeen years ago, the siren Ligeia commited a crime that, in the eyes of her people, was unforgivable; she fell in love with a human and tainted the pure blood that the sirens were so proud of by conceiving a daughter. They knew that if the Cleansers – the sirens charged with keeping their ancient bloodline pure- caught wind of it, their precious daughter would be destroyed. Ligeia was forced to part with her love in order to protect him and Peisinoe. Fifteen years went by and all seemed well. Peisinoe – or Katie, her human name – was growing into a beautiful young lady and all of her friends were envious of her lovely voice and her knack for getting things to go her way. She was also blissfully ignorant of the fact that she was being hunted by a deadly force. Two years ago, Peisinoe came home to a terrible scene; her father, horribly mutilated, lay in a pool of his own blood and a strange creature - which she later learned to be a Cleanser - that looked like it was made of water stood above his lifeless corpse. The thing turned towards her with an evil grin and she ran. Somehow, she ended up by the ocean and the beast was nowhere to be seen. Peisinoe collapsed with exhaustion from fear and flight and entered into a vision. Ligeia appeared to her and explained what had happened; her mother told her of the Cleansers, why they were after her, and that she must stay hidden at all costs until her people’s proud hearts were calmed. When Peisinoe awoke, heart-broken and grieving over her dead father and her lonely fate, she walked for weeks on end, eating barely anything and speaking not a word, till she reached a cave near Silent Falls. Ever since then she has lived a life of solitude there, her siren voice silenced.

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Re: Peisinoe's Character Application

Post by Argent on Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:20 pm

That's Fantastic

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Re: Peisinoe's Character Application

Post by Peisinoe on Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:40 pm

Thank you! The next step would be a power application, would it not?

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Post by Argent on Thu Mar 21, 2013 1:57 pm

Yes
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